I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
today we did some work about Matariki and we had to make a slide and you could work with some friends and calibrate together I created it with my friends Addison, Brodie, Jason, Nikau, Ethan, and myself and the author hope you like it.
Kia ora Benaiah. You and your group have started to create an interesting slide. Some of the information is a bit out of date. The slide seems unfinished so we will need to work on our publishing skills.
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Kia ora Benaiah.
ReplyDeleteYou and your group have started to create an interesting slide. Some of the information is a bit out of date. The slide seems unfinished so we will need to work on our publishing skills.