I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Benaiah. I like the way you have started here although I do think you could write more detail and explanation. Remember to be a courteous writer by using capital letters to start sentences and end of sentence punctuation.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Benaiah.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have started here although I do think you could write more detail and explanation. Remember to be a courteous writer by using capital letters to start sentences and end of sentence punctuation.