I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello. Benaiah Your All Blacks Flag Is Good It kind of looks like it Maybe next Time add More Information For your post And maybe Add Why you did it.It make it a bit Better. -Orlando
Kia Ora Benaiah, I like your blog post about your rugby ball collage. I think you did a good blog post. Ka Pai Beaniah. Maybe next time you could add more of an part at the top and say what you are going to do?
Good effort, Benaiah. One thing I think that might of made it a little better, would be to focus on where you place the rugby ball seem.I bet this year you will make a superior effort in cybersmart activities .Don't rush your finished product.Please write a little more information for the reader of your blog.Good work. Well done.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
hi its good but do the flag better next time
ReplyDeleteKia ora Benaiah, Christina here!
ReplyDeleteI love your all blacks flag but maybe can you add more information about the flag but its fine! #AWESOME~CHRISTINA
hi you got the ball shape right but next time work on the flag
ReplyDeleteHello benaiah its me matthew when you created your all black flag and actually your flag awesome
ReplyDeleteHello. Benaiah Your All Blacks Flag Is Good It kind of looks like it Maybe next Time add More Information For your post And maybe Add Why you did it.It make it a bit Better. -Orlando
ReplyDeleteHi Benaiah really good job i really like the way you made the rugby ball.
ReplyDeleteHi banana its brodie here.I like your post it's really cool.why did you have to make a all blacks ball.
ReplyDeleteHi Benaiah I like your creativity on that all blacks logo that you made it as a rugby ball that's cool bye bye now!
ReplyDeleteHola,benaiah
ReplyDeleteNice rugby ball!
next time i think you could you add some writing explaining why you did this
anyways that all bye!
Hi benaiah I think your college is very cool I think you can do a harder college
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Benaiah,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about your rugby ball collage. I think you did a good blog post. Ka Pai Beaniah. Maybe next time you could add more of an part at the top and say what you are going to do?
Blog you later.
We are going to have a focus on our blogs so keep an eye out for my blog posts video that I will share this week.
ReplyDeleteGood effort, Benaiah. One thing I think that might of made it a little better, would be to focus on where you place the rugby ball seem.I bet this year you will make a superior effort in cybersmart activities .Don't rush your finished product.Please write a little more information for the reader of your blog.Good work.
ReplyDeleteWell done.