I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
hi its chevelle here i enjoyed when you talked about kids in war did you think about puting why we eat anzac cookies why did you not put about anzac cookies
I like your Anzac day slide it's got lots of cool facts in it. I never new children carry messages for MI5 I really don't have any feed back you have made it to awesome!
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hi benainah it's me bea from your class and i love the way that you make this and it's awesome and pretty and bye
ReplyDeleteKia ora benaiah, i like the anzac day slide that you made and i enjoy it and bye
ReplyDeletehiyt it is lexi her i like the one abat anzac Day beakos it is ingtsn to red.you kod pot mor kalr.
ReplyDeletehi benainah it's me again and i enjoyed the part when you did this and i like what you did this slide and i love it bye
ReplyDeletehi its chevelle here i enjoyed when you talked about kids in war did you think about puting why we eat anzac cookies why did you not put about anzac cookies
ReplyDeletehi benainah please next time you could do something better please benainah thanks
ReplyDeleteHi benaiah it me and i love it and it was great but next time you can make more interesting slide and bye
ReplyDeleteKia ora Benaiah. Christina here I really like your anzac slide its awesome with all the facts on it. #GOODJOB~CHRISTINA
ReplyDeletehi benaiah i heard your doing anzac day things i just wonder why goldfish was used so.Maybe you could tell us why they were used.
ReplyDeleteHi bro.
ReplyDeleteThe first slide is AMAZING but maybe you could add more photos on the other slides!! It is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like your Anzac day slide it's got lots of cool facts in it. I never new children carry messages for MI5 I really don't have any feed back you have made it to awesome!
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