I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Benaiah, Zoey here from Whakamanawa! I love how you put a photo of the time it took and I like that you write something unlike some other blogs I have commented on. Some have only had a photo. Some have had only words which makes them boring. This reminded me of when I did Prototec a week ago. Maybe next time you could maybe write some more words because at the moment you don't have many words but in the future that can be your goal along with maybe your goal could also be to use Capital letters for your I and starting a sentence word. I hop you take my advice! Blog U Later! :3
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Kia ora Benaiah, Zoey here from Whakamanawa!
ReplyDeleteI love how you put a photo of the time it took and I like that you write something unlike some other blogs I have commented on. Some have only had a photo. Some have had only words which makes them boring. This reminded me of when I did Prototec a week ago. Maybe next time you could maybe write some more words because at the moment you don't have many words but in the future that can be your goal along with maybe your goal could also be to use Capital letters for your I and starting a sentence word. I hop you take my advice!
Blog U Later! :3