I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Benaiah, Zoey here from Whakamanawa! I love how you said that Ngakaunui is a nice and polite class were you all are friends and I agree you guess are a nice and polite class and your not jut all friends with your class youall friends with heaps of other people so Ngakaunui keep spreading your friendship, leadership and politeness! But maybe next time when you do a blog post like this one you should put more words to make it more interesting. Other than that one thing that you need to improve on your blog post is great! By the way your photo is amazing. Blog U Later! :3
Kia Ora Benaiah it is me Emalea. Great job. The part that I stood out was always smiling and polite I like that part. I learnt what Ngakaunui means but in the poem style. Maybe next time write an introduction about what it is? Also that is still great. Which one is yours? How did you guys do it? Anyway that all from me, bye
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Kia ora Benaiah, Zoey here from Whakamanawa!
ReplyDeleteI love how you said that Ngakaunui is a nice and polite class were you all are friends and I agree you guess are a nice and polite class and your not jut all friends with your class youall friends with heaps of other people so Ngakaunui keep spreading your friendship, leadership and politeness! But maybe next time when you do a blog post like this one you should put more words to make it more interesting. Other than that one thing that you need to improve on your blog post is great! By the way your photo is amazing.
Blog U Later! :3
Kia ora Shikarn here. Was just looking at your blog when I came past your wonderful art that you and your class did. Blog you latter.
ReplyDeletehey benaiah
ReplyDeleteits me dylan here its nice how u explain about what ur doing.
i dont really know what else to say. so im going to go now
se ya :)
Kia Ora Benaiah it is me Emalea.
ReplyDeleteGreat job. The part that I stood out was always smiling and polite I like that part. I learnt what Ngakaunui means but in the poem style. Maybe next time write an introduction about what it is? Also that is still great. Which one is yours? How did you guys do it? Anyway that all from me, bye