perswade leter

24 June

Dear: mum and dad

Woof woof a dog would be a good part of the family mum and dad I will walk and feed it.

The dog wood be garet cause the family needs some fun in our life and Tobey Neika Tim and Dlyan are annoying some times and. If they are annoying I can play with the dog and not them


I hope you can realize that the family needs a dog.

Sincerely
Benaiah

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